Here are some pictures of my essay I did on my opinion of the importance of art. I started out looking for repetition, but I noticed the only things that I kept repeating was the important things I had to bring up often. These words were key for helping me back up my thesis. I highlighted the important words in blue, as you can see there is lots of blue. I used a few transition words, those are highlighted in red, they helped me connect a few parts of my essay. I did not notice many parts in which my essay had a really good flow. I think I just need to take more time to think of better ways to have my essay flow. The essay is good, except it was worded a little bit awkwardly.
Nice work. 3/3