BEFORE: Throughout history the usage of photography has helped show world issues and tragedies. From pictures of the Vietnam war to pictures of just a homeless boy begging on the side of the road, photos help share a story. With the art of photography, we can help spread awareness all over the world. Art exposes Read More …
OLD ESSAY: Thomas Merton once said that “Art enables us to find ourselves and lose ourselves at the same time.”, art comes in so many different forms, but all of them hold an importance in the world and society today. Whether it is just seeing a picture that you like to a song that you Read More …
My goals when revising my essays are to: stay on track of my thesis, formulate a strong thesis, and provide significant evidence to support my thesis. One problem that I constantly face when I write is not staying on track of backing up my theses. I tend to fall of course and end up writing Read More …
Organization: “Throw more quotes in” Organization is based on how you place things in your essay. So when regarding the usage of quotes that falls under organization of the essay. Idea: “I like the idea of how you make the reader question things!” This is a comment based on an idea because I talked about Read More …
I think the peer review helped me a lot. It was a good way to see what others had to say about their different ideas. When I read people’s post that were using the same article as mine it was interesting to see what their thoughts and views on it were. Also, when reading others Read More …
“The transformative power of classical music” Ted Talk by Benjamin Zander is all about how important music is in the world. He emphasizes that people connect with music and it touches everyone in a different way. But when you connect with a certain piece of music that is speaks to the soul. Zander spoke about how Read More …
After visiting the EAs website my opinion changed a bit. Southan’s opinion on them seemed to be very extreme when you would read the article “Is Art A Waste of Time”. When I read through the website I still understood their idea of helping others but they do talk about not just giving your money Read More …
