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Blog #6 Revision strategy
My goals when revising my essays are to: stay on track of my thesis, formulate a strong thesis, and provide significant evidence to support my thesis. One problem that I constantly face when I write is not staying on track of backing up my theses. I tend to fall of course and end up writing Read More …
Blog #5 Comments
Organization: “Throw more quotes in” Organization is based on how you place things in your essay. So when regarding the usage of quotes that falls under organization of the essay. Idea: “I like the idea of how you make the reader question things!” This is a comment based on an idea because I talked about Read More …
Peer Review Blog #4
I think the peer review helped me a lot. It was a good way to see what others had to say about their different ideas. When I read people’s post that were using the same article as mine it was interesting to see what their thoughts and views on it were. Also, when reading others Read More …
“The transformative power of classical music”
“The transformative power of classical music” Ted Talk by Benjamin Zander is all about how important music is in the world. He emphasizes that people connect with music and it touches everyone in a different way. But when you connect with a certain piece of music that is speaks to the soul. Zander spoke about how Read More …
Blog #2
After visiting the EAs website my opinion changed a bit. Southan’s opinion on them seemed to be very extreme when you would read the article “Is Art A Waste of Time”. When I read through the website I still understood their idea of helping others but they do talk about not just giving your money Read More …
“Is Art a Waste of Time?”
The beliefs of the EAs seem more like a cult than an activist group. My father grew up with an alcoholic father that walked out on his family at the age of 10. My grandmother was left to raise 3 boys all on her own and money was not something they could just give away. Read More …
About me
On May 15th, 1999, Eric James Lederman in Newton Wellesley Hospital, Massachusetts. I am the youngest of three children in my family. My brother Rob (21) is a senior at Worchester Polytechnic Institution and my sister Emma (20) is a sophomore at Salem State University. I come from a very close family and take much Read More …
